David Guinness

Said to the television remote control: "Stop it! Stop flashing at me! AGHHHH!!!!"

Hello Searria! I know there's quite a delay in posting, but... Here goes... I enjoyed reading this! You show a great deal of potential as a writer. Mostly what you ...

This'll take a little time to explain... I'll post a really good answer later. Thanks, KayJuran. I'll work on the fire. I modelled this, creating a 3d scene, rendered an ...

Sorry guys, for my evil creation.. ;) I'll see if I can embed a link to the real thing, or something, and make it more interactive. That avvie was created ...

This was one of my first attempts at modeling, trying to include some type of light source.

Erm.. to me it sounds like Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire with three extra tasks. But still, sounds interesting. :) Perhaps a private mentor's tasks?

Good poem. It's easy to hear the voice of the speaker.

Good poem. I really don't have any critiques. :shock: :D

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I liked reading this, though it felt a bit cliched to me. You might play around with a different metaphors- "monster" didn't seem quite powerful enough to do the rest ...

The second stanza is wonderful, really wonderful. I enjoyed this poem very much, but the beginning and end seemed disconnected from the middle.

This reminds me of a couple of doodles in a field guide I once saw. I particularly like the eyes. :)

I like this very much. You gave a clear, powerful message, with well-chosen words. I look forward to reading more of your work!

I hope you don't mind my commenting... :D First, I agree with all JigSaw said, even now. Second, Good descriptions of blood and gore and things! (I know this because ...

Thank you SO MUCH for rhyming "correctly". Very effective word choice and phrasing. The last line is... so powerful. Wonderful work.